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• spud paris, france✭✭✭✭

  May 2012 Posts: 101

  i think there is a problem with the link. you have to change the videos privacy setting so that those with the link can view it. i think for the moment its on a totally private setting where only you can access it
• thetoneblasters New

  May 2012 edited May 2012 Posts: 19

  Try it now and let me know if it works and is this only available to Givone members?
• spud paris, france✭✭✭✭

  May 2012 Posts: 101

  Use inlisted- only the people who read your post can access it- thats exclusive enough no? Or Send the link to thé givone group by email and take it out the post.
• anthon_74 Marin county, CA✭✭✭✭ Alta Mira M 01

  May 2012 Posts: 561

  Hey man,
  
  I watched your video. Good stuff ! Maybe next time video from a wider angle so we can see your right hand too.
  One thing I noticed (I think) is that on the A section, during the E7 to F7, and back to E7, you phrased around the E7 chord the whole time. While this works because it anticipates the resolve back to the E7, I would say for your next go round, Try repeating whatever phrase you did on the E7 up a half step during the F.
  Not a critique as much as a different idea to try.
  
  And maybe you did this but I didn't hear it...
  
  All in all, though, I really liked your melodic phrases. They seemed fluid and conveyed the chord structure well.
  
  Anthony
• Spalo England✭✭✭✭ Manouche Guitars "Modele Jazz Moreno" No.116, 1980's Saga Blueridge "Macaferri 500", Maton 1960's Semi, Fender Telecaster, Aria FA65 Archtop

  May 2012 Posts: 186

  Anthony
  
  I'd been happy to have played what you did. Good stuff.
  
  Sp
• spud paris, france✭✭✭✭

  May 2012 Posts: 101

  that's a very good example i think of how to begin working on these forms. we can see you exploring and at the same time trying to keep it swinging. keep going!!
  if i were to make a crtiticism it would be thats sometimes its a little heavy handed. i think you could keep your sense of swing and sometimes play a little less agressively. but thats a bit of a personal thing. (i dont play agressively enough myself)
  thanks for sharing